Tunnel / Poem

There has to be a tunnel, longest one

Where we have taken our walks together

 

The light, forbidden-

Seasons,Time – all hidden

 

Whenever I want to step outside

Cold stirring silence draws me back

Blindfolded in a brooding melody

My lonely spirit swirl in secrecy

 

I started with questions –

 

“I recite poems .. what’s your way ? Where is that slate ?

Is it paper, female or seashore?

Or living in a tunnel forever ?”

One Comment on “Tunnel / Poem

  1. a good attempt….

    could have replaced the line
    “I started with questions –”

    something having a smooth flow….

    “my mind questioned” or
    “my mind did ponder”

    these are just a suggestion…

    great going….

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